In the story “The Most Dangerous Game,” a man named Rainsford was on a yacht traveling to find an island. Leaning over the yacht, he heard a gun shot and fell into the water. He swam to shore and fell asleep not knowing that soon he would be hunted.
If I was in this story, I would like to be the hunter because if I was being hunted, there would be more chances to die. I would rather hunt someone because I would not want to die and I think it would be fun to hunt people. I would feel bad sometimes because it would be kind of like murder, not a game. Also, I think I would get worried because if someone won, if they would try to leave and turn me in. If I ever lost, I would be ashamed because I know I failed, especially if I lost for the first time.
This was very great and especially in the first paragraph because you put background information. But in the second paragraph you start to lean away from being the hunter. I would assume you are throwing out pros and cons?
ReplyDeleteThanks! And I also understand what your talking about in the second paragraph.
ReplyDeletei really liked how you organized it, but i think it sounded a little too much like a summary in some parts, but good job!
ReplyDeleteYeah for recognizing mistakes and commenting back on your own work!
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